Hello and welcome to or welcome back to my blog! In todays blog I will be telling you what my little sister said about my final task. It'll include some of the things she liked, some of the things she didn't like and so on. I think all of the feed back she gave was good. Most of it has do with editing but I think there were one or two filming ones. She's always really helpful when it comes to things like these so I'm excited to share her critiques with you. I'll start off with the things she thought could improve, or didn't like. "The cuts in the beginning are choppy". That is something that I do agree with and will try to fix. I think if I overlay more of the sounds it might be better. She also said that at the end it needs some background music because it was quiet. I already have an idea on how I'll resolve that and I'll go into detail on that in the re-edit blog. The two biggest critiques that she gave in my opinion was that she didn't...